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Question: What about this poem!? is it any good!?
I wrote all the poems i have placed on this myself,

Dreaming

Every night when I'm alone,
I dream about you, and if your home!.
I dream about me being with you
and I dream about how my life would be without you!.

Meeting you was the best thing ever
but I wish that moment could've lasted forever!.

When I first looked into your eyes
Thats when I started drowning in dreams of you
since that day,
I haven't stopped!.
So I guess one moment did last forever!.






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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think your poem is awesome! I love the way you wrote the ending which was so romantic!. I think you have a great gift of writing!. Please continue writing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like your poem, it's great!. the ending has a lot of meanings, it's amazing!.!.!.great job, i'd like to read more from you, so keep writing :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

that is very good :)

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