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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this colour poem any good?Question: Is this colour poem any good!? We had to write a poem about a colour for school, and I wrote about black!. Don't worry, I'm not emo or anything -- I just like writing dark stuff!. =] Here it is!.!.!.
Black is!.!.!.!. The darkest alley on the darkest night, A crow at midnight, waiting to take flight!. A pitch dark closet in a pitch dark room, The absence of light in a dead man's tomb!. It lurks until the rising of the sun: Black's the only colour that isn't one!. So, what do you think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Last line suggestions Waiting for a day that may never come or As empty as a beating drum, or listening to the darks last hum The rest is good!. Well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com Black Sky Poetry: A black sky at night is a beautiful delight For one thing that it will bring This would be the moon which will come out very soon!. Way up high in the sky are the stars!. its beauty is far however the sight feels near they can be seen when its clear!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent poem! The visuals were great, the ending perfect!. "lurks until the rising of the sun" really cool! Like it's an animal!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com the above poem is really good you seem to have the potential to do better you can improve the last lineWww@QuestionHome@Com I liked it very good!. also colour was spelt correctly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I thought it was really good,but the last line could be better!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i think its really good!. hope u get an A =]Www@QuestionHome@Com You spelled color wrong!. I didn't like the last line!. 'Black's the only colour that isn't one!.' I got it but I didn't really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |