What do you think of my Pirate Poem?

Question: What do you think of my Pirate Poem!?

Argh! I shivered me timbers
and walked the plank
i fell in a hole
up me deck went a shank!.

I Sat in the hole
with rum on my mind
i broke my peg leg
and used it to climb

when i got out
i went to the brig
I sat on a stool
and carved on a twig

i pondered real hard
and then i saw thee
The Captain alone
at peace with the sea
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, your are crazy W!.S!. This is as good as it was the first time i read itWww@QuestionHome@Com

First stanza, first line has too many syllables, and the second line needs one more syllable!.

Other than that, I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ahaha
that's cute:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOL!.!.!.IT WUZ OKWww@QuestionHome@Com