All because of my poetry you rate and be honest?

Question: All because of my poetry you rate and be honest!?

I!. I exist because of you
I smile because of you
I am sad because of you

II!. You make me wanna fly above the sky
My love you make me,believe in love
I believe in your love!.
All because of you

III!. My heart is pumping fast
My soul can break free
I realize that i am in love
All because of you

IV!. When i am sick
I think of you
And all sickness disappear
All because of you

V!. I love you so
There is no other girl
Except you my love
All because of you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it doesnt flow but i get the point nonetheless!. it's beautiful poetry, so who's it about!? who has captured the loving eye of the great L-sama!?
i rate this one a 6 out of 10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very natural but not that creative!. But because you're main source is your feelings i will give you 10 out of 10, in terms of originality sorry but it is only 4 don't be offended sorry but it is true!. But then if u let it see by the one you love she will appreciate it more!. just care for the one!. The one that u will going to offer this poem Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good one!!
well it has a lot of feelings'
but i think u can do betterWww@QuestionHome@Com