This is a poem my roommate wrote!. He just writes for the hell of it, not even an English major, but for some reason this poem just seems really amazing to me!. I love it!.
What do you think!? Am I overreacting or is it good!?
"On the roof
Of nearby shed
The sun begins
To bow its head
The auburn sky
Denounces day
The stars that fly
Start to stray
Across the clouds
With scattered ties
The ups and downs
The tyros fly
The newborn dusk
Is yet to know
The ending secret
Of winds that blow
The gasps for air
The clutch of life
The twilight wanes
And turns to night
Littering darkness
The dance of stars
Unlike daylight,
Teasing Mars
The twisting nether
Of ties that bind
The earth to heaven
And us behind
The revolution
Of our world
Makes solution
Now unfurled
The catch of night
The brink of day
Here we stand
As it fades away"Www@QuestionHome@Com