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Question: Since Elys started this!.!.!.what say you to this frightening demon dream!?
Dozing on the Wrong Night
Demon dream, sequestered long,
AROSE
yes, havoc to be played tonight
Demon dream, frightening shadow
IS HERE
covers will hold no warmth tonight
Demon dream, Halloween fires glow
THE STAKE
as clock is striking midnight hour
Demon dream, doorbell is clanging
SAVE ME!
relax honey, trick or treaters!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Heheheheheheeeeeee!.!.!.!.NOW ya got the SPIRIT!!!
See what 24 hour shifts do!?
Good one Neon!!! Love the repetition of 'demon dream'!.!.!.makes me wonder if the demon is dreaming, and not you! Gotta think on this one!!
I never started nuthin!.!.!.yet!.!.!.Halloweeny is that 'time'!.!.!.heheheheheheWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is an interesting one!.!.!.I read it (obviously) as one does, just as written on the page!. Okay!.!.not great!.!.!.just okay!. Then I thought, This is neonman there must be more to this than meets the eye!. So, I look again!. Aha!.!.!.and found I could read it in multiple ways - across, or down the page!. Now, that elevates it up a notch!. Then because of the last line, it went up another notch!.
Thanks, for entertaining me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nonman, just saw you take my name in vain in one of your answers to someone's scribblings!.!.!.tsk, tsk!. Iano survives because he is a real poet!.!.!.not a pretender like some!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like the form on this, especially as I read down through the bold centre of each stanza!. The last line was fun, but boy your trick or treaters come late!Www@QuestionHome@Com
What's the problem!? If you don't someones work don't say anything for these are someones world!. I know for I have many worlds killed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Loud chuckles, well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com