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Question: Look at this poem I wrote!.!?
I know its sort of corny
I just kinda let go when I write poems!.
and, plz don't call me emo,
i'm not!.
this is just how i get my feelings out









p!.s!.-it about me and a friend, NOT a relationship




What to do!?
I love and hate you!.
It hurts to let go!.
You make it so hard on me!.
But all my problems are because of you!.
You've got my back,
but you're friendship is a sacrifice,
The sacrifice!.
The memories haunt me,
My heart longs to laugh with you again!.
You are my best friend!.
But I can't take the spending and stealing,
and you always win!.
But to lose you, you who understands me best,
would be to take my heart and break it where its already broken!.
And I can't take another tragedie of losing some I love,
especially if I know you're out there,
waiting to be there for me again!.
But they all tell me to let go!.
And what to do i don't know,
Our friendship has left footprints on my heart!.
and now you tell me jokes as i sit so still!.
Usually you can tell you how I feel
The jokes we've shared, the the losses we've grieved over!.
We share the pain of life,
and I know you so well!.
Best friends forever,
but you put me through h e l l!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
quite niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it's certainly!.!.!. passionate!.
You're very!.!.!. um!.!.!. passionate!. And the whole thing is really!.!.!.!. verbose!.!.!. er!.!.!. garrulous!? That's the best I can do, dear!.
Keep trying with the whole!.!.!. emotion thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats pretty good!. if emo is emotional, then yea, its emo lol!. but thats ok!. everyone has emotions!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's sad! but very good!. this describes a friendship of mine that fell apart a few years ago!. hopefully you guys can mend what has been broken!. Www@QuestionHome@Com