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Question: Will this poem bite your imagination!?
The Teeth
By S!.F!. Reborn (Koye Lott)

In a world of teeth,
The molars don't bicker with the incisors!.
Nor do canines,
Find fault with bicuspids!.
The first teeth may cause pain,
Yet the last seek wisdom!.

When cared for they are heavenly,
Arrayed in light!.
Given white robes to wear!.
They cause mouths to rejoice, and be admired!.
Some, even brace themselves for the future!.
Seeking straighter paths,
Without access to an abscess!.

The Great Dentist loves to see a smile!.
Yellow teeth He cleans,
Crooked teeth,
Made straight,
Infections,
Healed!.

Yet, in all His Patience and Mercy,
The Dentist has boundaries!.
Rotten teeth are pulled,
And cast out, never to be found in the Mouth again!.
But clean teeth,
Brings forth smiles!.

Some mouths don't believe in the Dentist,
While some mouths just go to spit in the sink!.
Yet I'd rather face the drill of correction,
Than be a stain on the bib!

But hey!.!.!.It's my teeth, right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OH!.!.!.!.!.MY!.!.!.!.!.!.GOODNESS!
I LOVED this!!!!
clever play on so many words,
wonderful metaphors galore!

2 days, 2 of the best I've read from you!
Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, I love it, it is so true, (as one who now has ones that can be removed at night), may vow!. Take care of them, or else!

You never cease to amaze, taking ordinary things and making them extraordinary!.



Edit: "The fool has said there is no God," is only 12 years old!. She wouldn't get it, yet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I went in and said PULL them!.!.
the dentist said NAY!.!. he did not agree and sent me away
I went to the next guy and said can you help me
He sat and explained how pulling them would be
TRAGIC
Although they were holey, with problems galore
he set to work !.!. my teeth to restore!.
Now I almost all done It has not been fun!.!.
But the smile I now sport is a nice one!.!.

Thanks for the incentive for me to respond with inventive!.!. ness!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or is is preventive !.!.ness!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Biblical Allegory !? I like it!.

MINISTER
S!.F!.C!.U!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Very Cleverly put together!.
A real mouth piece!. I would say!. ha ha!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! That actually put a smile on my face!. That was cute!

Mind if I share it with my friends!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's great, Semper, thank you for sharing it!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Clever is this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i have no idea whats its talking about Www@QuestionHome@Com

well put!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Brings back memories, my can not wander back that far!. I have false ones!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In all my life, I was blessed with great teeth!. I had to have a cavity filled when I was 13 due to having a bb bounce off a tooth while playing war games!. (yep, learned the hard way) Only bad tooth I ever had!. developed a bone malady that deteriorated the bone anchoring the roots to the point that the teeth got loose much like the first teeth we lose!. I pulled them one by one myself until finally there were ten!. The ten little indians, I called them, then I went to my dentist and said it was time for a massacre, and they all came out that day!. My dentist lamented through all those years of losing teeth that he couldn't save them, and that it was a shame for perfect teeth to come out!. Oh, well, each of us must endure!. I liked your teeth poem, it gave me pleasure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com