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Question: What is your opinion of my first Triolet!?
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by Elaine Polin

The poets have built a new Forum,
Their masterpieces all on display,
They’ll discuss new books with decorum—
The poets have built a new Forum!.
Today Martians gather as quorum,
Trolls deleted and out of their way—
The poets have built a new Forum,
Their masterpieces all on display!

http://www!.poetsofmars!.com/index_copy(50!.!.!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love your first Triolet! Now I must venture over there and check out this new Forum!. No Trolls sounds very nice to me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

a very interesting message,,, "interesting" being defined as upbeat and positive,,, a forum with decorum

never underestimate the power and drive of poets,,, for certainly standing in the path of a speeding train would be less foolish!.

foolish me,,, I saw the message as usual and ignored the style,,, the style chosen is good,,,and of course you conformed very nicelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Strictly in accordance with community guidelines, and replying directly to your specific question, I have to say that I am honestly underwhelmed by it!. The poets have a new forum!? Well, maybe the 'Martians' have, but that's not quite the same thing now, is it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

A decorum forum, how sweet
sugared replies, with zingy zests!.
Ah do I hear the stampede of feet!?
Friends all, no unwanted guests!.
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Woo hoo! is all I can say for now!. Interesting format the Triolet!. I like this one!. Thank you for sharing this!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Having only had a few sips of coffee, all I can say is Wooo-Hooo!
Looking forward to visiting often!.

Now I'm off to look up quorum!.
Good morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com

First of all, Congrats!
This form is challenging!. Your pen proved its sharpness with such eloquently penned announcement!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was very nice!. Maybe one day I will be a member!. Until then I would like too be a visitor!. See you all over there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Triolets are a very interesting form, lovely joined rhyming couplets!
Good message as well!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it just fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it; I think it is very cool how you took a Triolet and brought it into modern times!.tWww@QuestionHome@Com

okWww@QuestionHome@Com

I learn so much from you! Your work is stellar!Www@QuestionHome@Com

How do I flush it!.!.!. oh sorry, I don't see so well without my glasses!.!.!. there we go!.!.!. ah yes, how do I flush it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com