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Position:Home>Poetry> What of the morning tongue waggling?Question: What of the morning tongue waggling!? Wickedly dressed in a long black number When most of the others have gone to slumber She stealthily tiptoes, down the long staircase In stocking feet, her shoes in hand Her only thought, her only longing Find and conquer that fearless man The dimly lit halls haunted with shadows A light glowing luminous, beckons her quietly From under the door at the end of the hall She reaches the door and wiggles the handle The door opens wide to a scene lit with candles Tomorrow will everyone know of this scandal!? Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I keep reading this and finding more to like every time!. The last line doesn't work for me because I want more!. It can be read a multitude of ways and that is the sign of a great poem for me!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love the sensual atmosphere and exotic descriptions!. My favorite line is 'Wickedly dressed in a long black number, when most of the others have gone to slumber!." Yay, she's out for a night of freedom and fun! I love all your poems, they just keep getting so good with every one I read!. You are a great poet!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it! It's crisp and clean and tells a wonderful story, a mystery and leaves the reader hanging!. Terrifically done Maddamselfly!Www@QuestionHome@Com Ha ha, sounds a bit like me !. No doubt every one will know and Tongues will start wagging! Who Cares,!? Let Her have her fun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh yes, this definitely needs to continue!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com oooohhhhh! Did you ever capture MOOD in this one, my oh my, like watching it in a murder mystery movie! Great!Www@QuestionHome@Com a smooth intriguing read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com waiting for the next episode!Www@QuestionHome@Com |