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Question: My little religious poem!?
dont you feel better now im going to hell
and you've damned the rest of my people as well!?
isnt self-love fantastically great!?
especially when accompanied by such utter hate!.
if you're lies are true (and i've much to learn)
honesy says that your savior will burn!.
though you deny it, it really is true,
though you condemn us, dear christ was a jew!


i mean no offense to anyone but im a jewish girl on my brothers account that's sick of being told shes going to hell!.

i have many christian friends and i am not a racist, but sometimes i wish people would show me the same courtesy!.

that said, comments ad critiques are greatly appreciated

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this poem I think is much too deep
before I go to bed to sleep
I do not understand your view
but then again!.!.Im not a jew

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i really really really like it! im not a christian, so i can relate!. ugh!. good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com