i wrote a poem and everyone likes it but i think im a really bad writer and so they told me to post it and see what other people said about it, so feedback please :]
The Sea of Broken Dreams
Staring through the window,
Onto the vast emptiness,
Try to find myself!.
The sea crashes violently around me,
Lost, swimming in this pool of scarlet tears;
Of endless crushed hopes and unfulfilled dreams,
Slowly drowning in my own sorrow!.
And you call sweetly to me,
Your voice a lullaby,
Fall willingly into your arms,
Heal me with you loving words,
Dry my tears with your tender touch,
And you are the reason, the only reason
In my every thought,
You save me from this terrible loneliness,
In my dreams,
You cure me of this pain!.
You take my breath away,
And my last one would not be in vein,
If I faded from this world,
To the sound of your heartbeat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com