Critique My New Poem: Your Lovely Eyes?

Question: Critique My New Poem: Your Lovely Eyes!?

Your Lovely Eyes
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Your Lovely Eyes
Capture my soul
There is magic in them
I wonder what is it!?
I get fixed on your eyes
I can't wander away
I feel a mysterious joy
pouring inside of me
Looking and gazing at
Your lovely eyes
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is a beautiful, lyrical poem that feels like it could be set to music!. It transports the reader away into the soulful love of the poet!. A great piece of writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sorry i dont know it just doesnt sound like a real poem to me!.

answer mine!?
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This may have been to short for any real connection to develop!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it you must really love her Www@QuestionHome@Com