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Question: What do you think of my poem!? and does anyone know what its about!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
Im interested to know if anyone can actually figure out what I have written it about!.

All good and bad comments needed be honest!.

Oh Mia! oh Mia!
how I do seek you
But how I do loath you!.
You help me,
yet you do break me
My mind so needs you;
my body needs rid’a you!.

I call your name oh Mia!
When I feel low and defeated,
you come to my aid!.
Deflate me you do, I love you Mia
For the balance you so give!.
But my body is breaking
… and aching inside!.
The damage is there
and will grow in despair!.

Oh Mia, why do you tell me
Its okay to do the deeds!? for
you are here! To pick up the pieces
… saving me from my weakness!
Wouldn’t it be better if I did not do the deeds!?
For my mind to be free of these exhausting thoughts!
then you would need not be here
and I would be free
… maybe even happy!.

But for now Mia
I look to you
To help me be
… until I can find peace
Surcome my weakness
and be … just me!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ahh! MIA is a *****!.
im sorry your going through this!.
i was anorexic, tried to recover and became bulimic for about 4 months!.
now im back to anorexia!.
i hate bulimia so much!. you feel like your in control when you purge, yet you couldn't stop even if you wanted to!.

and eating disorders are classified as a mental illness!. strange, but true!.
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Drugs!? To me it seems this poem is all about drugs - how drugs help you when you are unstable/depressed, yet they crush you too!. I'm probs way off track but thats wat i think its about!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

it seems to me that the poem is about a mental illness,Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it (:Www@QuestionHome@Com