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Question: What your opinion on my poem!? Suggestions!?
Unfair

Do you know how I feel,
I knew it wasn't forever,
In time my heart will heal,
I guess it is time to sever!.

What is left to gain,
I now only know despair,
was in all in vain,
It's time to end this affair!.

It was never ideal,
I have tried this endeavour,
what is left to appeal,
there's nothing else whatsoever!.

I want no more pain,
your completely unaware,
that's very certain!.
why is it always unfair!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it ok a little more spice to it then it be over the top!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poor ButterflyWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it, keep writing :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com