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Question: "Recognition/Resolute" Is this a poem or prose!?
Causal window shopping,
we turned 'round to see
each other there, surprised!
the same dancing eyes
share depth of heart,
electric warmth, instantly replayed
as eighteen years before!.
deep breath,
pause, feel the glow!.
In harmony, Hello!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
He spoke,
Migawd! it is so good to see you!.
Yes it is!.!.!.!.!.!.I mean you too!.
(blush red)
Eyes fixed, no blinks!.
How have you been!?
Okay!.
I mean, really been!?
I know;!.!.!.!.I've meet your daughter!.
Isn't she a beauty, he glows!.
She looks just like you!.
(impish grins exchange)
Migawd! I can't believe!.!.!.!.
your still the same!
So are you!.
Hands clasp, eyes yield as before
good-bye
something unfinished evermore!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I enjoyed!. Left some mystery of what relationship they had and how it still affects their random meetings!. Typo on 'I've met your daughter!.' It is a poem to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's prose!. You have no trope,which means no unifying image!.
You also have no revelation!. The end of your poem should make us realize something about the world as a whole that we didn't know before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Something unfinished," this is poetic conclusion!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would say it's prose poetry, but what do I know!?
And the ending DOES hold a meaning or revelation for me!.!.!.That is that life goes on!.
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It is good prose poetry!.!.!.you have underlying universals here!.!.!.and the banter holds the readers' attention!. Good onyer!Www@QuestionHome@Com
As the writer, the choice is yours!. Www@QuestionHome@Com