What do you think of 'Mary, Bellydancing' poem?

Question: What do you think of 'Mary, Bellydancing' poem!?

Mary bellydanced down the aisle
Of the church on 57th!.
Mary swayed her hips, made men smile!.
Onsets of fainting from dour wives!.!.!.

Who was this woman, tinkling bells!
In spite of the sacredness
Within statued neglect of hells!
Invectives were many!.!.!.hell's bells!

Mary let drop the Seventh Veil,
Proceeded to read from text!.!.!.
Minister bolted at first 'Hail!'
"Preliminary findings fail!.!.!.

"Have for many a century,
To justify joy and glee!.!.!.
How about changing this dullness
Towards a fulfilling religion!? Agree!?

"For God so loved your world, He gave
Laughter to you!.!.!.to enjoy!
Yuk it up, laugh it up! And when
Temptation arrives!.!.!.smiles will
Destroy!"Www@QuestionHome@Com

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the versatility of your mind continues to amaze and delight me

I also agree wholeheartedly with DondiWww@QuestionHome@Com

An acrostic(ation) with a powerful message!
When you write a poem like this, I have to read it over and over!. You have a very delicate pen that describes spiritual, social, and historical concepts/events!.
"Have for many a century,
To justify joy and glee!.!."
Powerful!.!. Excellent read! TY!
edit : And yes, Hell 's bells!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My belly dances when I laugh!.

I've told Mary to stop doing that, but obviously to no a-veil !

Maybe Mary needs to start up her own church - I am sure she will get packed houses each Sunday!. Jesus was Middle Eastern - he would have seen such performances!. Mary Magdalena used to be a "Private Dancer" until her conversion!. There is a place for joyful dancing "as unto the Lord"Www@QuestionHome@Com

When executed properly, a belly-dance is not only entertaining, but a thing of beauty to see!. When done improperly, the entertainment turns pornographic in nature, and is still a thing of beauty to see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You would not have done well living in Salem! lol The feel good church does look like it would be fun! Great line!.!.!.'Mary let drop the Seventh Veil!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have now got a life sized picture of this in my head!.
From shock to flat out belly laugh!. (No pun intended!.)
I love it! You paint pictures with words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Grrrr, satanic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

As I truly believe all religions are on equally unsteady footings, this has some appeal to me!. It would be honest, for a change!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You didn't have to mention ANY colors to paint the entire scene in scarlet and gold! Loved it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

As usual, lovely stuff!. It brings laughter to this mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I delighted in this fun romp!
But I saw you in the lead role!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is this an example of Maryolatry!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the mixture of East and West-Coast cultures!. Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Clear images drawn in your poem!. Good job!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Shake it but don't break it, MaryWww@QuestionHome@Com