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That I cant erase I want you back but its too late I cant talk to you or see you Its just not fair cuz when your not here I can bearly breathe without you You are my life You are my air I need you now I made a mistake I want you back But its too late I don’t know why I do love you so much Im only a girl This is too much But I cant go on without you in my life to hold on tight Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Okay, I'm not even kidding!. I just played through a very simple "G, Em, C, D" chord progression on my guitar, and sang the words of your poem to it, and it makes for a pretty awesome song!. Sounds like a ballad from the 50s the way I played it!. You should really put this to music!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com As a pop song, it's fine (but don't forget punctuation)!. As a poem, it's nothing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com honestly, not good!. 1-2 out of 10!. take this as advice to better yourselfWww@QuestionHome@Com its pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |