How can I improve my poem "Comin' Soon to your Neighborhood?"?

Question: How can I improve my poem "Comin' Soon to your Neighborhood!?"!?

Comin’ Soon to Your Neighborhood

Starship flippin’, trippin’, slippin’
Through the heavens, past the Moon
Poets reachin’, graspin’, grippin’
Hang on tight! We’ll be there soon!.

Blastin’, castin’ all doubts aside
Up through Earth’s dead atmosphere
Meet me in Kansas for the ride
Soon, my Martians, we’ll be there!
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8-7-8-7!.!.!.nope, can't do no better!!! a-b-a-b!.!.!.not one doubt here!.!.!.

For this poem, and for what Elaine did for TD and Dr!. Swetman yesterday!.!.!.CHEERS!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

metallic, humanized voice over the star-ship PA,,,

WARNING,,, WARNING,,,

Improvement not required!.

that's all folks !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kansas City, Kansas City here I come!.I`m going to Kansas City!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Improve!?!?!?!?

Are you crazy!?!?

Bingo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wooo-Hooo! Love it just as it is!
Don't forget to pick me up, okay!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

How can one improve on perfection!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool, you should write a kids book based on this poem :D they'll love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Now this is a beat! G1Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are we in Kansas yet, Toto!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol that kicks butt nicely done!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

don't be mad!
it's perfectWww@QuestionHome@Com