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Question: How can I improve my poem "Comin' Soon to your Neighborhood!?"!?
Comin’ Soon to Your Neighborhood
Starship flippin’, trippin’, slippin’
Through the heavens, past the Moon
Poets reachin’, graspin’, grippin’
Hang on tight! We’ll be there soon!.
Blastin’, castin’ all doubts aside
Up through Earth’s dead atmosphere
Meet me in Kansas for the ride
Soon, my Martians, we’ll be there!
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8-7-8-7!.!.!.nope, can't do no better!!! a-b-a-b!.!.!.not one doubt here!.!.!.
For this poem, and for what Elaine did for TD and Dr!. Swetman yesterday!.!.!.CHEERS!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
metallic, humanized voice over the star-ship PA,,,
WARNING,,, WARNING,,,
Improvement not required!.
that's all folks !Www@QuestionHome@Com
Kansas City, Kansas City here I come!.I`m going to Kansas City!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Improve!?!?!?!?
Are you crazy!?!?
Bingo!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wooo-Hooo! Love it just as it is!
Don't forget to pick me up, okay!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
How can one improve on perfection!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
cool, you should write a kids book based on this poem :D they'll love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
Now this is a beat! G1Www@QuestionHome@Com
Are we in Kansas yet, Toto!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
lol that kicks butt nicely done!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
don't be mad!
it's perfectWww@QuestionHome@Com