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Radiant passion that soars through the heart, A feeling that requires great caution, I am not a Romeo, and you are not a Juliet, But we are one, one to love, one to care, one to see, and one to be, together in rich harmoney!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Alan; That is pretty good for a first time, but put some more depth in it, like I mean put your soul in it!. Think of love as you see it and place yourself and someone you would love in it and make it more loving!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Great Job!Www@QuestionHome@Com chills!. just chillsWww@QuestionHome@Com sweeeeeet in one word:) go on finish itWww@QuestionHome@Com |