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Question: What do you think!? title- Sleeping Angel!?
Stolen memories,
Cased in stone!.
Caged with the lies,
Of love never known!.

In a bed of thorns,
Poisoned with a kiss!.
A sleeping angel lies,
With not a soul to miss!.

Cruel world,
Stole all beauty from life!.
Wicked little heart,
Brings nothing but strife!.

Seasons change,
The clock strikes again!.
A slow coming death,
In the form of a sin!.

Roses grow again,
Blooming red as blood!.
Perfect at first,
But then the deeds done!.

Poor sleeping angel,
Tossed away again!.
So longing to be loved,
She forgets she can't win!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like this one it expresses thoughts and its deep
you are very good but sleeping angel sounds kinda like a happier kinda poem maybe "a never ending rest"!? sorry im probbli no help:[ but can u check mine out!? its sad and i think suckish but ur opinions please and also it doesnt rhyme much its just suppos to express feelings
check it out
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