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Question: Is this short poem of mine any good!?
Carefully
watering this flower
my mouth
becomes dry!.

Slowly arranging
soil around her
maybe
keeping her safe!.

Somehow
her constant
under my feet
crumbles!.

Here
I wait
for her love
still in vain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow this poem is really awesome and really is quite lovely!.Your really good and i liked how it all came together!.!.!.Here's a star!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Beautiful! Star for you

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