Carefully
watering this flower
my mouth
becomes dry!.
Slowly arranging
soil around her
maybe
keeping her safe!.
Somehow
her constant
under my feet
crumbles!.
Here
I wait
for her love
still in vain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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watering this flower my mouth becomes dry!. Slowly arranging soil around her maybe keeping her safe!. Somehow her constant under my feet crumbles!. Here I wait for her love still in vain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wow this poem is really awesome and really is quite lovely!.Your really good and i liked how it all came together!.!.!.Here's a star!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This one is beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful! Star for you Have a nice day!Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it! Good Job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com okWww@QuestionHome@Com i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com |