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Question: Poem I wrote for my brother!. What do you think!?
Forever the same in my mind you'll be
Now only in a photograph for my eyes to see
I weep for you with a grief thats strong
I can't believe your really gone
My heart aches and my soul grieves
Did you really mean to leave!?
I see you everywhere I look Until I'm blinded by tears
Now I'm living through my darkest fears
Everyone hurts its to much to bear
I need to know how could you do this!? Didn't you care!?
Time heals all wounds, I don't believe its true
I will never be over you
You were a piece to us all!. Now we're left undone
by you our Mothers only Son
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This was a great poem!. I wanted to cry!. I can feel your hurt and pain in the words you wrote!. It was a great poem to contribute to your brother!. Keep on writing it will help you get through the grieving period!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This Is The BEST Poem I Have Ever Heard You Should Put On A Website Or Something! I Am Extremely Sorry To Hear About Your Brother!. My Younger, 10 Years Old , Brother Was Killed By A Guy Who is Now In Jail! I Have Never Been The Same! I Know How You Feel! I Just Prayed To Keep Him, Me, And My Family Safe! God's Speed!
The Hurt Will Always Be With You! But So Will He! Watching You And Keeping You Safe!
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a very good poem!.!.!. just a very good poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!.
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very good poem!. so your brother committed suicide!? I'm sorry to hear that!. how old was he!?Www@QuestionHome@Com