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Question: Is this poem good!? its called magic garden!?
Magic Garden
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gather round and stay with me
if you want to discover
the enchanted world lived by the trees
the dead locks fear to smother

a passerby looks forward sees
the middle of the cornered streets
illuminating fire streaks
so dimly known to man

i entered passed the hanging doors
stepped onto the faded floors
unnoticed by the viewing mourns
i gave you what i promised

distracted by your flowers
we didn't notice the passing hours
while the sinister devours
and so much brighter than before

to experience rebirth from the spine
and in the grass marks you will shine
glistening in the deep sunlight
exposed by powerful gloomy skies

and a muse for inspiration
helps to serve my desolation
in the likeness of creation
in the other world, outdoors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it alot!. Nature is so cool! Escape with out even leaving the farm!.
Naturally! AwesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like how the guy above me spelled okey!. I do that too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like muse of inspiration part good job Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very deep, i like it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

khodaya! This was great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it, well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's okeyWww@QuestionHome@Com

i didnt really get it!. but it sounds nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com