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Question: The slideshow that's not me!?
I can't let you in!.
You see the same damn slide show
manufactured to project what's within!.
You see the hologram, the carbon-copy!.
Like me!.!.!.!.
but not quite the same!.
The same show made for the world to see
the show that isn't quite like me!.
And I hide behind the projector
showing you pieces of me
from the edited collection
of what the world wants to see!.
It isn't me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow, i really liked that poem!. it was very!.!.deep and really showed how you were feeling at the time you wrote that!. if i were to grade that id probably give it like and A not kidding, i loved the whole entire analogy of it, i thought it was great!. adn you could tell it was coming for the heart and that you were reaching out for people to realize who you really are!. GREAT POEM in all!. keep at the poetry ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice poem, I would title it "It Isn't Me!." but that is me!. You have a great talent, I hope you are writing more!. I would read them!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Sounds good to me!.
Kinda explains what people are like!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good one!. And I like shorter poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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love it, and its verry true about alot of people
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