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Question: What do you think of my poem/song!?
Life Moves On

When all is lost
Why even try!?
When your heart gets broken
And you don’t know why
When you’re trying to stand
But you keep hitting the floor
And when the pain subsides
You know they’ll be more

But just take one more chance
Find out where you belong
Because whether or not you succeed
Life moves on
And on
And on
And on
And on
Yes, life moves on

Have you ever thought
you could touch the sky!?
Then realized it’s not possible
And wanted to die
When you’re trying to soar
And can’t even leave the ground
You want to give up all hope
Go back to sitting around

But just take one more chance
Find out where you belong
Because whether or not you succeed
Life moves on
And on
And on
And on
And on
Yes, life moves on

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow, u write a perfect flow of ur song! beautiful well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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