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Question: Interpret this poem please!? Critiques would be nice & tell me if you liked it!.!?
i awake at night interrupting this violent red and crimson dream!.
within my nightmare the shadows of my past overcome me!.
my veins ache as i ponder about you and i!.
can you feel this temptation too!?
my brain pumps this unfamiliar secretion of lust!.
this broken city skyline is the only romance we'll ever find in this corpse infested town!.
i rub my bloodshot eyes and bite my nail!.
i cannot weave metaphors that weigh out this dilema!.
after all, innocence is a point of view!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
VERY well written!
I am not sure what it is about but would love if you message me and let me know-- vampires!? rape or loss of virginity!? those are my only guesses!
By corpse infested town, I get the vampires or you might be trying to say that everyone is "dead" inside!. Www@QuestionHome@Com