What do you think of 'Supper or Beauty' poem?

Question: What do you think of 'Supper or Beauty' poem!?

Everyday the fishing pole called, hook smiled!.
Everyday the bayous melted my eyes anew!.!.!.

With watercolors vapid, vagrant, hyacinth-call!.
And the bass waited, finning defiantly,smiling!.

Sitting on that wharf, wanting that night's feast,
Realizing the feast was already before me!.!.!.

What beauty to relish with seasoning of years!.
What years to relish, already seasoned!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Very nice, felt like I was sitting right next to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Contemplation and contentment - my favorite fish (trout) - course that was because - we were only near rivers - had to go to the ocean (river's mouth) to find the bass!. Liked the "hook smiled" - great visual!. I guess I'm odd man out - what's this all about Dondi's face - did I miss something or did Snidley start it all !??Www@QuestionHome@Com

Count me out of this 'sitting on Dondi's face' ritual!.!.!.!.I've got something else important to do!.!.!.like sweep the fode (yard, to you)!.

The poem!.!.!.!.!.loved it!.!.!.!.I don't have to squint my brain to understand it, but it does what I love in poetry!.!.!.it creates sentences I have never seen before!.!.!.Everyday the bayous melted my eyes anew!.!.!.wow!.

Lovely stuff!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very good!.
I can just see the watermelons, fried fish, hot dogs and relish!.
Beef burgers with melted cheese!.
A real feast before going to bed!.

A recipe for sweet dreams!.

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Hey you guys!.!.!.I want to sit on Dondi's face too!.
I'm potty trained and I'm nice and warm!.
I'll warm him up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so lovely, very inviting!.
Very nice!.
I'll bring the potato salad!.
!.!.!.!.and do nuts for Dondi!.

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And I'll make sure I scrub my butt so clean for Dondi!.!.!.
!.!.!.he can make it whistle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's the best reason I know to go fishing!. Sitting on a rock, feet in the water!. wind coming down the canyon through the trees!. catching a fish would be nice, but sometimes just the sitting is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well done Elysbeth!.
Since we're ALL sittin down for this feast!.!.!.
and Dondi's the table!.!.!.
maybe I can wiggle my little butt in there too!.!.!.!.

He used to sniff us girls bicycle seats in grade school in Achafalia!.

Wipe that grin off of yer face Dondi!.!.!.!.
He he he!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Elys, this just sizzles with wordplay!. Subtle internal rhyme and alliteration everywhere: "finning defiantly", "wharf wanting", "vapid, waited!." You have an amazing ear!. I'll take mine with relish!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

fishing,,, even if you do not get a single nibble, the sensory experiences are still there, perfectly seasoned with an artistic presentation, just waiting to be savored,,, to slake the hunger gnawing in your soulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Spotted catfish from the achafalia river are the best in the world, and the spoonbill from the red river make other fish seem like river eels!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
now you've made me hungry!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
now what !!!!

guess I could peck at a few snails!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.I'm a snail pekker!.!.!.

Can I sit on Dondi's face too!.!.!!!

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Yo !!! Sabrina!.!.!.I can make my butt whistle too!.
Especially when Elysbeth feeds me beans!.

Yuk yuk yuk yuk!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW !!!!
Sounds good!.
As long as there's no Skeeters!.
Good place for a BBQ!.

I wanna sit on Dondi's face too!.
I have a clean butt!.
Squeeky clean!.

You can make me whistle anytime Dondi!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful, sometimes we just need to look with new eyes at what we've become to used to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Powerful, especially the last two lines!.TY!Www@QuestionHome@Com

BRB- Galley is open and calling, sauce picante and frog legs tonight!. Come on over!. :-)>Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful!. perfectly pennedWww@QuestionHome@Com

This paints a great picture!. Well done!. Remember sometimes it will have to be frozen fish patties though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was brought up fishing and hunting!. This was very beautiful, It made me think of my Brother who passed away Dec 2000!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey this looks like a full meal deal!.
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Let's all sit on Dondi's face !!!

!.!.!.but he better shave first!.!.no one wants a ruff butt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com