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Position:Home>Poetry> What about this one, any good?Question: What about this one, any good!? Words of rappers become plays in the street, the actors our kids who live n die by the beat!. Our old were once heroes fought in the wars, they now live in fear behind their own doors Girls want to be sexy long before they’re teens, so dress like the WAGS in their glossy magazines !. Politics and religion are now intertwined, it’s marriage of convenience bind lead blind!. young are repressed and old are forgotten our moral standards in taters down trodden!. Community spirit’s been exstercied I think we should all mourn it’s demise!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very good, I see the same as you do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I really liked this poem!. I could really understand the message you were trying to convey to yuor audience!. What you said is true!.!.!.moral standards from yesterdays past are forgotten as we kids of today do not have those morals aas of the past!.!.girls do try to idolize those girls in the magazines to be "sexy!." Great poem!! 9-10!.!. Keep up the good work and keep posting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a cool poem, so true!. One typo though, you said 'bind' instead of 'blind' in the forth stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com good!your cool i love poetry=] you should be a lyricistWww@QuestionHome@Com awww i loove itWww@QuestionHome@Com That's really good ! i wish my poems flowed like that!Www@QuestionHome@Com |