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Question: Four Very Short Poems(if you consider them to be so)!?
1!. Chalk
The street moved
Under my glass feet,
Then stopped at
A pile of
Lips!.
2!. Pineapple
Future heroes
Jump and stomp
Their blistered feet, screaming
For more lemonade!.
3!. Rubies
Ant footprints
Are filled with
The galaxy’s
Laughter!.
4!. Glitter
Licorice fa?ades
Gradually absorb
The sun!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
These are fascinating! In order to appreciate them it was necessary for me to suspend the intellectual and analytic aspects of thought and just let them wash over me!. With such a wealth of ambiguity, enigma, and indirectness, these can mean so many different things!. I read them each at least a half dozen times and got a different sensation each and every time!. Some might hold these to be deep in meaning, some might say that they don't really have much meaning at all!. I made a mirror from each one, and I was able to see whatever was in me to be seen!. I call that fun!. Thanks!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Brilliant!. I love how you read into the topics and look at it from a side that most wouldn't think of!. I just love the description used, without making it too long and detailed!. Short, sweet, but descriptive nonetheless!. Sheer genius!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I agree with the above answerer!. Though I'd prefer if you could make them longer, they're great!. I'm starting to doubt now if your wrote them!. But if you did, Congrats, go get em' published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
kinda makes me jumpy but i guess if i read it in another prospective it is pretty good bit happy but emo-ishWww@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, that's good! I like them!
And it's kinda!.!.!.deep, in a way :)
It makes you think - I like to think lol!.
Good job!.
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Definitely abstract!. The first and third I liked!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
are you crazy!?Www@QuestionHome@Com