taking aim
1 2 3
unless it drops
or wheezes and crones
just call me sugarbean
or utilities will drop
and run round the outside
taking aim at the back
1 2 3
unless you stop
in which case I'll retire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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1 2 3 unless it drops or wheezes and crones just call me sugarbean or utilities will drop and run round the outside taking aim at the back 1 2 3 unless you stop in which case I'll retire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: or what ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com i don't understand what your trying to say according to my english teacher!.!.!.that's good because its a poem were you have to dig details to understand it!. Its fine to me!Www@QuestionHome@Com the rythym of the poem is good but it is hard to understand your poem!. mam!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it's totally cute :)Www@QuestionHome@Com |