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Question: Can you feel what l feel!?



You are the demon,

that shattered her life!.

Slicing through her spirit,

like the blade of a knife!.

You came out of the dark shadows,

and crept into the night!.

Crushing her beautiful soul,

under the still silver moonlight!.

Then there lay her body,

abandoned and tortured!.

Her dark memories of you,

will always be violent and haunted!.

You are evil,

you are pure sin!.

She will never let you beat her,

she will never let you win!.

Her strength is truly amazing,

she is courageous and she is strong!.

With tender love in her heart,

she shows us how to move on!.

I always look at her,

with love and with pride!.

But the crack in my heart,

and my tears l can't hide!.

If l ever do find you,

or if the night releases you name!.

I will hunt you down so quickly,

and you will never breath life again!.



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Deep, the words scream to me, what has this evil person done to that girl!? And that girl is so close to you, who is she!? Don't answer my questions, that's the beauty of poetry is to keep you wondering!.

Read mine!?
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Wow,man I really feel for the evil one being persecuted by society just because he has pimples !
He should try clearasil & warm water!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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oh my!.!.that was breathtaking!.!.a little dark but it fits my mood right now!.!.you are a true poet my friend :]Www@QuestionHome@Com