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Question: I started this poem can some1 help me!?
drifting into space
trying to escape her radiant face
passing mars,venus, and pluto too
i just can't believe were throughWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i tried hard to mend
but i just couldnt comprehend
i let the only light of my night
get away from my life
and now i must make it right

so let me fly into ur world
i wasnt welcomed at pluto
and i misses u mucho
am i getting thrught to u

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into another universe
it's strange, it's green, it is perverse
this is where I get it right
free poetry lessons here tonight!

Have fun!.
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talk about your journey through "Space"
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