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Question: What do you think of this poem!? Honesty is appreciated, rudeness will be ignored!. Thanks!.!?
The Wave

Cross wind blows sea state rise
Brings a glisten to my eyes
Higher and higher rush like a hoard
I reach back and grab my board

I start to run diving head first
Preparing myself for the worst
I paddle out awed with wonder
Over one wave and the next, under

There it is towering high
As if it can touch the sky
I turn back for the shore
Kicking my feet just a little more

I jump up and ride the wave
Water surrounds like a cave
As I emerge from the pipe
I say to myself dude… this one’s ripe
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I don't know much about surfing and this poem is so good I feel as though I am the one that is out in the ocean!!! Awsome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

great thought, fullof bounce, full of lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com