Dark poem..what do you think?

Question: Dark poem!.!.what do you think!?

What is Depression!?

Its the pit of despair
The emptiness within
Its feeling lost
In an unknown world
Its watching the blood flow
As your wrist scar
its feeling gone
Without being dead
Its the hopelessness of life
That nothing is the same
Its physically feeling hurt
While you're already down
Its not wanting to live
Even when there's so much
Its not knowing what is ahead
Cause you might not be here
Its running forever
With no end in sight
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Verry very good!. Thats what depression fells like!. I'm living it!. When will I find a wife!? can you take a look at my poem please!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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