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Question: Have you ever slowed down and noticed the night!?
"Night of Reflection part V"

80 turns to 63,
calm down, honey, breathe, believe
hope has stronger arms,
resist the urge to
lie on the Earth,
making friends with granite shrines!.

Reflection, endless, has no meaning,
just a tale of where I've been!.
The ghosts still dance in rising fog,
my voice tears with trying to sing!.

I'm free but chained,
I love but fear
and lose all that I
hold so dear!.

I'm white but black,
where shadows dwell!.
My thoughts write heaven
but live in hell!.

And in the end I am alone
with the picture of me,
of who I was, all that I am,
clinging to a faithless hope
of what I'll never be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
No more words needed!.!.!.!.!.!.Just fantastic, ETWww@QuestionHome@Com

i loved the poem
I saw my self in it
really reminds me of my own way of thinking

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I hope you will like my poems just the way I liked urs
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Pondering words, I like the line especially, Reflection endless has no
meaning!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!."Just a tale of where I've been!." Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no unfortuanatly i love the line making friends with granite shrines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was quite a series, Eva! Lots of dark introspection, but sunrise is just over the hill! Good write!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice poem !?or question!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh my goddess for goodness sake Evadne dear it saddens me to see you soWww@QuestionHome@Com