When the final curtain falls in place
It overtakes her unawares—
The harlequin unmasks her face
And, trembling, drops her tears!.
That heavy heart kept a silent pace
And has followed her all those years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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It overtakes her unawares— The harlequin unmasks her face And, trembling, drops her tears!. That heavy heart kept a silent pace And has followed her all those years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Instead, I think I'lI just savor them and get lost in the imagery!. Www@QuestionHome@Com The mask becomes a friend, a lover, so close and yet a leech, draining color from her face, leaving a pale reflection of color not known, the painted sky, the clear eye, not sight, blindness!. The heavy heart beats, the anvil on which reality is smelted, following, dragging, holding back the maskless face, a terrifying grandeur all the more worthy of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com we live in our own world in our own entity yet few know that each human being is dual in personality we show a face to the world which is not our real self, we only know what and who we are and only towards life's end we muster the courage to acknowledge our real selves!. our painting hangs on the wall then we know what we actually were!. ur words take words out of my mouth and render me speechless!. i am too small fry to comment sir on ur composition no matter how much i may try!. congratulations please accept as my heart felt appreciation hello canada''Www@QuestionHome@Com Always present a happy face - do not let your sorrow show!. If you have suffered a love thats lost - do not throw a tantrum - just let them go!. Why do we hide our feelings so!? To add less grief - into a world - that is already overflowing in sorrow!.?Www@QuestionHome@Com This one grabbed me!. The mask of years holding back the real!. Heart heavy indeed!. Good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com So few words to create such an image, such a theme, such a concept!. Entire BOOKS I've read on this subject, but none expressed it so well!. Well done, indeed!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm silenced by the image you paint with a few strokes of your brush!.Well done indeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well done indeed! The Harlequin follows us all our lives!.!.!.as our true shadow!. What masks we all wear!.!.!.would that we could do without them, once and forever!. Well, very well done!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't know how!.!.!.!. You have a good beginning!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |