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Question: What is the name of this form of poetry and what are its requirements!?
Time for a Moment!?

We had but a moment
a moment which held
which held time still
time still continued somewhere
continued somewhere beyond
somewhere beyond our moment
our moment was a lifetime
a lifetime where we knew
we knew though we parted
we parted in space, not time!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This form, I believe, is called the "Thang", sometimes referred to as the "Groovy Thang!." They are all variations on the Rondo (Rondeaux)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's closer to the Partenza Represa than the Mirrored Sestet!.

The Mirrored Sestet repeats the FIRST word of line one at the END of line two!. The Partenza Represa repeats the LAST word(s) of line one at the BEGINNING of line two (and there should be a steady beat with four line stanzas)!. Check this out, it's one of my favorites:
http://poemhunter!.com/poem/a-celestial-a!.!.!.

Therefore it is neither and you can call it what you want!. I'd call it "good", or even "Time for a Moment" by Sue!.
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The Mirror Sestet

quite good, by the way

edit below>!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I first came across this as a Partenza Represa a la Spytfyr but it is also shown in Shadowpoetry as per Evelyn's answer (Slightly different format to Spyfyr's)!.

Either way, if the poem touches something inside you and you enjoy it, is a label critical!? As you have written it it falls somewhere between the wo so why not call it a Sue Represa!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its called a Partenza Represa - I believe it was a Sptfyr creation

here's a sample of hers:
http://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.

You did just fine Sue! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was thinking of Spytfyr's Partenza Represa as well!. I see a couple of folks have gone to the trouble of finding the link for ya, so I won't bother!.
VERY nice poem, by the way!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank-you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We come, we go!.
The next ones, they go free
All around,
renewal and destruction I see!.
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Sptfyr's creation!.!.!.!.but I think if it isn't quite that!.!.!.it could be called
Sue's Deca Enjambmentenza Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good!.!.!.ReadWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like--Www@QuestionHome@Com

Heart exposed!. A poetic device we all use, yours is touchingWww@QuestionHome@Com