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Question: Were you ever grateful to get out of the barn!?
The Elm Cutters

It was Sunday, Father’s day,
and I didn’t want to be there, cutting wood
in the middle of June!.
I argued as well as a 12 year old boy
can argue with his father
but my words were deftly quelled
and there I was
in the back
of a pick up truck on a Sunday morning
with a cooler
full of lunch
and an old gray box full
of chains and chain oil and I
remember
the smell of that old gray box
the smell of power
it had, the power to help a neighbor
and the power to heat a home
and I remember thinking
that it was somehow important
to my father to be here so I embraced it
and I watched everything and
I learned!.
The world became ours,
my world, my father’s
world,
we owned it,
we were in charge, we
made the rules, and we
worked together and everyone
I saw that day was in our
World
and I watched them,
knowing my father would dictate
what was to be done
and how to do it
and I was his helper
and he instructed them
and assured them and nothing, nothing,
nothing
could go wrong or happen to me
when I was in that world!.
So we dropped
that huge elm
that grew too close to the barn,
and the rope held true
and the tree fell true
and there was cheering and I was proud
and my father held me
and laughed and we cut that old tree to pieces
and the chainsaw roared and the sawdust flew and
that smell
was the greatest smell on earth,
the power of it overwhelmed us
and my father and I ruled the world on that day with our
ropes and our chains
and oils and cooler
full of lunch
and I remember
thinking how happy I was
because I spent father’s day alone
with my dad
and nobody else
existed in that world
that we had created!.
And months later, when
the high pitched whine of burning elm
filled the living room
my father said
“That’s that tree we dropped
at Clymer’s place, remember that
David!?”
And I said
yes,
I remembered!.


For
elyslund!.

I hope you got out of that old
barn
for awhile!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If this was written on the spur of the moment, then teach me!!! No, I'm not out of that barn!.!.!.I'm watching that elm fall in slow motion, smelling the fireplace heat!.!.!.oh yes, heat can be smelled!
That elm was a great metaphor, beyond its surface meaning!.!.!.WOW!
Thank you, indeed!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Re: Book demand
Message:
Please have mercy and publish a book exclusively of this man's work!.
These teases of a few posts a day I can bear no longer!.
I want to hold his words in my hands, touch their ink, feel their warmth on a page, not this cold computer screen!.
Sincerely,
SueWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yet another example of why I should refrain from posting anything today!.

As we say in my village "stupendo"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is beautiful darlin!.!.!.!.I don't usually read poetry or anything that long!.!.but the first couple of sentences you had me pulled in!.!.!.thank you

edit!.!.!.Now your avatar is just plain scary!.!.!.are you melting!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Memories are a wonderful thing!. Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Don't you just love those good memories!.That was very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are on a roll!. Another great one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, i love every sight, smell and touch of barns!. i've always wanted to live in one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

THANKS, DPM!. Thats all I can say for such a read!Www@QuestionHome@Com

great poem

images just took me there!.

thank you Www@QuestionHome@Com

two from you in one day that make me cry!.!.!.for all the right reasons!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.

Did you write this!? This is one of the best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If we can find a way to bottle this we're made!

Marvellous!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i remember those days as a child when my father told my brother and me what to do!. those days are gone nowWww@QuestionHome@Com

This takes my breath away!. Have you ever read "From Blossoms" by Li-Young Lee!? I think you will love it as much as I!.

http://www!.poetryfoundation!.org/archive/!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like stepping back in time for me here - and I still remember the blisters, the bruises and the dog tiredness of the day too!.

I still cut my own wood here, and maybe, perhaps, making a memory such as this for my own kids!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That brought back memories of my dad!. He died when I was very young, but I can remember him cutting wood with a cross cut saw!. And at night the family would sit around the wood burning stove and listen while he played his guitar!. Thanks Buk!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Isn't it amazing how certain memories remain so vivid in our minds!? We can play them over and over, down to the tiniest details!.
I'll bet you remember what you had for lunch that day!.
Lovely memory!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do remember this from a while back I think!. It sounds oddly familiar!. wood cut fresh and smell the smell of it!. I've been stacking wood all day today and this is actually a good metaphor for it!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have brought back memories that I thought were once tucked away forgotten forever!.
Even the smell that lingers in that old barn is so sensuous to my senses!.
I can smell the chain oil as it heats from the churning blade!.!.!.
I once, felled a 40 foot tree, true!.!.!.WOW! memories!.
Thank you for the memories!.!.!.I certainly did need them today!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've missed my wood heat for the past two winters,stacking in the woodshed,chopping kindling and the wood ash first thing in the mornings!.Now the chimney has leaked and ruined the woodstove as well,ends that era for me I suppose!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com