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Question: Does this peom I wrote make you depressed!?
It's youre last chance your last words
You're last soundless cry to the world
Your hope is all you have left
And it burns like the plains in your hollow heart
It's your last plead
You pray to God to be
Redeemed
And you say he won't hear
You say that you fear the unknown
Well life is an empty broken heart
life's a bleeding soul
A tearing scar
when anger drives you home
and it's the only power you know
They'll twist and bend your burning words
You cry out-- but no one heard
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
No actually it is quite the opposite you seem to have found a new Talent and it is a very good poem a bit dark but no that depressing im glad to have finally meet a person who shares my talent of writing dark poetry yeah i know a guy that writes poetry weird huh well if you ever want to read one of mine just message and i will send you a few!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It made me happy!. Thinking of bad stuff always makes me happy!. That's how I survive in this world!.
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no, i like it!. read mineWww@QuestionHome@Com
im already depressed!. in fact!.!.!. tgmnyhj cbx dchgy bnyyhgfgvjhfghhnbZdxcfghbgvcxcvfgbhnvcfg!.!.!. vbcfrftgWww@QuestionHome@Com