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Position:Home>Poetry> I have some reflections here. Would you speak to them?Question: I have some reflections here!. Would you speak to them!? Tender age sixteen
Brilliant blue eyes killer smile First kiss tossed away * Deep brown killer eyes Reflecting off blue brilliant eyes Telling pretty lies * First love overcomes Hard to let go, move along Life takes frequent turns * Amour arises Detonates, bursts into flames Passions kindle fires * Fanning flames inspire Hearts desires escalating Youth terminated Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Has the girl with the bright blue eyes had her kiss stolen by the more bolder brown eye man!? I think 'telling pretty lies' means he has lured her in with fake promises and compliments!. The next lines mean that first love is hard to forget, "there's no love like the first love", even when faced with new loves or opportunities in life!. Still we must try to forget and move on, and not stay focused on that love!. However, 'amour arises' and the passion is too great sometimes, its overwhelming and it can cloud judgement, make people do many things, sacrifice things for the one they have fallen in love with!. "Passions kindle fire" and sometimes that fire is trouble, it may prevent the person from seeing the truth!. "Fanning flames inspire, Hearts desires escalating, Youth termined" I think at that point if the person doesn't get out of the relationship, if they stay focused on it all the time, they can get caught up in it, overwhelmed with the 'flames' they seek more of it as it is addicting, which can lead to 'Youth terminated" or the disruption of innocence or the escalating to maturity with the responsibilities that are know to us at this point!. A baby maybe!? I don't know that's just my thoughts, I love your work! What a very beautiful and startling poem!. So real!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I found this quite stimulating!. Although your line: "Detonates, bursts into flames" could be seen as repetitive in thought!. Not like the rest!. All in all I enjoyed it!. I may be off on this, but I obtained!.!.!. Young life's first sexual encounter, hence "Youth terminated"!. Nice work!. SamWww@QuestionHome@Com this is one powerful closing in that you both summarized the poem and exploded new mental visions of the pleasure and pain of no longer being bound by youthful limits Fanning flames inspire Hearts desires escalating Youth terminated Www@QuestionHome@Com You've been a busy, productive poet with this form today, haven't you!? Do you describe the end of youth or the end of innocence here, I can't help but wonder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh wow, I can relate to that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |