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Toddler Lepidopterous Entomology

Green calipitters grow into lallow flutterbies
For curious little girls
They'll shake their golden curls

This should cause no surprise
In thse wonderful little worlds
Green calipitters grow into lallow flutterbies

Such is the wonder of little worlds
Imparted in this curious wise
For curious little girls

These curious little girls
When you show any surprise
They'll shake their golden curls

They'll shake their golden curls
At your impudent surprise!.
For curious little girls
Green calipitters grow into lallow flutterbies!Www@QuestionHome@Com


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A Vilannelle illustrating that 'out of the mouths of babes oft times come gems!.' Children reinvent language!. Wonderful poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh , I am reminded of my littleness, when flutterbies metamorphosed from calipitters!. What a wonder it was and is!. There are still littlies who shake their locks and impart curious wisdom, always, always!. This is a wonderful look at nature from a toddlers-eye view!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are a sensitive and perceptive soul and your poems are pictures of your understanding and compassion!. Thank you for sharing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

my youngest sister always said yallow flutterbies, wonderful poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I will never look at a butterfly the same way again! lol Fun read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sweet!. My little one says lallow too :) Www@QuestionHome@Com