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Question: Are you also sad it's past!?
Pattern of Past Summer
Simplicity indeed is a pattern!.
Woven by blue water, slipping
Over black, polished river rocks!.
Descending into a turquoise pool!.
Splash of a Cardinal!.
A fleck of Oriole wings!.
All tempered to vibrancy!.
Muted now!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What jumped at me was Cardinal and Oriole capitalized, like baseball teams!.
Baseball, that summer sport
"All tempered to vibrancy!.
Muted now"
Muted for a Cardinal fan at least!.!.!.
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You have '68!. We have '06!. And '34!.
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The '68 Tigers
Denny, the star
In the World Series
Lolich by far
Cardinals are king
Building 3-1 lead
Gibson homers
Thrice MVP!?
Detroit is pissed
So are the fans
Cash and Kaline
Northrup Slams!
Battling back
Take '68 Crown
Erasing the memory
Of '34 Frown!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I didn't realize i was sad, until your words framed it so beautifully and made my sadness real!. I don't want the splashes and flecks to be muted!!! Alas, at least we know they will return to confirm life and its vibrancy!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm this sad
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=xBoRilB7l!.!.!.
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Simple structure and words make this a well crafted work!. My compliments!. I go now!.!.!.I feel muted!Www@QuestionHome@Com