I'm 15 and i have written this poem for my mum, for her birthday!. I am trying to make it quite personal, to make her cry with happyness!.!.!. I am kind of stuck!.!.!. here is what i have so far:
You gave me life
I will never forget
The undeniable love
From my very first breath
You’re my mum
Always there for me
The one I love
You set me free
Everyday you’re here
Watching me grow
My gratitude for everything
I never do show
You’re my savior
You kept me here
Ignored the doc!.
Against all fear
The last part is about my mumr loosing my twin in the first couple months, the doctor said she should get the area cleaned out!. mum said no and that saved my life, as they did not know i was there!.!.!.!.!. few months later, i arrived!.
What could i write next!?
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