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Letters in the bark

There alone and brown
Under a whitest winter gown
Old and weathered of age
A tree of youth still stands

Midst a village that's gone
Where once the sun had shone
But our love - was brighter more
There our names still grow

Ever often and few
Pass the roads in which we grew
And they stand and they gaze
In our sun, in the rays
Of a past that shimmers, and so gently glimmers
In the haze now thickest


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The archaic/erratic wording is fascinating (I am not complaining by calling it erratic, I love it!.) The poem is beautiful and true!. Thanks for making my morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a beautiful poem!. I feel that many people can relate to it!. I'm not quite there yet, but will be some day!. At least I can appreciate the beauty of your poem!. You have a talent!. That is for sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good piece of work!.
Will it sound better if it is:
"Under the whitest winter gown" instead of "Under a whitest winter gown"!?
its upto you!.!.!.
"But our love- was brighter more" this line is brilliant
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Of a past that shimmers, and so gently glimmers
In the haze now thickest
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i really love this poem very beautiful, i'll give it a 9!.9999999997657Www@QuestionHome@Com