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ORBITING MASS
Go, Moon,
and take
the starlight with you!.
You look silly,
suspended there,
using a hill
for a pillow!.
Leave from here,
before
people stop and stare,
such a spectacle!.
Don’t make a scene…
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ORBITING MASS Go, Moon, and take the starlight with you!. You look silly, suspended there, using a hill for a pillow!. Leave from here, before people stop and stare, such a spectacle!. Don’t make a scene… ***** Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Off the top of my head I think the important aspects of poetry is the poem has to grab you in some way!. It has to be interesting!. It doesn't have to be complex, and on the other hand you can complicate the hell out of it, but either was it has to grab you!. Orbiting Mass does that!. Nice images, fun to read!. Www@QuestionHome@Com You screwed up the metaphor I use for my old lady; Gotta find another password to bed! Now, that is one aspect of poetry: Redefining old images, concepts, and ideas while searching for new ones!. Could it happen without making a scene!?! * thinking of all those celebrities* Profound! Www@QuestionHome@Com To me, it is important to draw a picture for the reader and let them take the ride with you throughout the poem!. The connection to your audience !.!.!.!.!.!. I like your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Like a martini, proper ingredients, maybe an olive, definitely stirred and delivered in an unique glass!. Yours fits that bill quite nicely!. Do you need 'from' on S2L1!? Www@QuestionHome@Com I am a Moon, Star, and Cloud gazer!. I like it when they make a spectacle of themselves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is about time we saw some humor on this site!. I mean, this type of subtle humor, not the silliness we usually see when people are trying to be funny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com *Clapping madly* I will learn to write poetry, I will, I will!Www@QuestionHome@Com Aaahhh! Some light in the afternoon!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |