What do you think of this? Any comments?

Question: What do you think of this!? Any comments!?

i wrote it for my girlfriend:

What is an angel!?
Is it someone who looks after you!?
Someone who makes sure you're alright!?
Or someone who makes you happy everyday!?
Is an angel someone who loves you!?
Someone you love regardless!?
Are they even visible!?
Well to me angels are real!.!.because on September 21!.!.an angel became mine!.
That angel is you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That is sooo cute!! i love it and your girlfriend is very lucky to have you!. if only every guy would do that!.!.!.!. lol (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, darling! I love it! You are my angel too! I will always remember that golden day, September 21, when you first came to my ashram and we made sweet love next to the tarkoori!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and my THANK U TO u ure an ANGEL Www@QuestionHome@Com