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Question: Do you like my poem!? Let me know plz!?
Dejected and rejected i sit alone and cry-I long for your touch and don’t even know why!.

Cruel and kind, back and forth you go,where you’ll stop only you know!.

Its games you play but not the fun kind,you leave me numb, both body and mind!.

With fear I aproach and am greeted with stinging reproach!.

You mock what is weak and fight what is strong and tell me I am what is wrong!.



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think its good!. I know just the kind of person you are talking about!.

"Cruel and kind, back and forth you go,where you’ll stop only you know!." This is a good line, but it reminds me of the old "round and round it goes, where it stops nobody knows"

I would like to see a different line but with the same sentiment!.

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