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Do you want me or what you see or am i the joker you want to set free!.Do you like me and do you really care or do i repulse you with my stare,and am i what you want or what you seek or do you think that i'm just a freak!.Do you think i turn you on or do you think that passion's gone,because in my heart there's still that flame,but do you also feel the same,and if you don't then "set me free",and let me be with someone who wants me!.I" won't" hold on to a hopeless dream or a love that will "never be" so do you want to hold me tight or do you want me out of your sight,because it's your choice and not mine,and whatever you choose will be just fine,but don't lead me on or hurt my heart because your the one who liked me from the start!.You chased me long,and with a fight,but now i'm the one going through this plight so tell me will this game ever end or will we always have to pretend that you and i are just friends,but let me tell you what i see it's someone who is "not' me,and it's a person who you want by your side,but maybe thats not what i can provide,because i like to be free,but do you know what yu want or like what you see,and if you don't then just tell me,because as you know i can take the truth from you,and every stinging word that you put me through so what do you want,and how can i guess if you want more or you want less,because i don't know,and i can't see,and i don't know what you want from me,and if it's love that you desire then don't put out my burning fire,because you hold on,but also set me free so what do you want from me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I'm a hard out poetry lover from way back!. And sorta took it apon myself to fix your puntuation and sh!t!.!.
lol also it made it easier for me to read it!.!.
sorry for interfering!.

Do you want me or what you see or am i the joker you want to set free!.
Do you like me and do you really care or do i repulse you with my stare,
and am i what you want or what you seek or do you think that i'm just a freak!.
Do you think i turn you on or do you think that passion's gone,
because in my heart there's still that flame,
but do you also feel the same,
and if you don't then "set me free",
and let me be with someone who wants me!.
I" won't" hold on to a hopeless dream or a love that will "never be"
so do you want to hold me tight or do you want me out of your sight,
because it's your choice and not mine,
and whatever you choose will be just fine,
but don't lead me on or hurt my heart
because your the one who liked me from the start!.
You chased me long,and with a fight,
but now i'm the one going through this plight
so tell me will this game ever end
or will we always have to pretend
that you and i are just friends,
but let me tell you what i see
it's someone who is "not' me,
and it's a person who you want by your side,
but maybe thats not what i can provide,
because i like to be free,
but do you know what you want or like what you see,
and if you don't then just tell me,
because as you know i can take the truth from you,
and every stinging word that you put me through so what do you want,
and how can i guess if you want more or you want less,
because i don't know,
and i can't see,
and i don't know what you want from me,
and if it's love that you desire
then don't put out my burning fire,
because you hold on,
but also set me free
so what do you want from me!.

To answer your question;

I'd say that this is definately a love poem!.
Sound like you're having trouble somewhere or other, But you sorta know the direction you're gonna choose!.

You're in love, hard!. But the person you love does not seem to return that love with as much passion!.

You're scared!. I feel your pain too, i've been in the exact position before!.

You feel like you've been living a lie almost!. Being someone you're not!. Being the person you think your love wants you to be, and not who you truly want to be!.

Basically i think there's a lot of stuff under the skin of your relationship!.
You really should just get it out in the open, maybe show your love this poem, as it's beautifully written and should make things a lot clearer!. I think the main idea behind your poem is that you're scared!.
You need to get things out in the open and clarify exactly what is going wrong with you and your love!.!.

Of course i could be completely off track =]

EDIT:
Oh awesome =]
I hoped i wasn't too far off track!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like a poem about a boy who really wants to know if his girlfriend loves him or if hes just wasteing his time with her!. he wants to know so if shes really doesnt he can be set free and find the true one for him!. this poem is really deep!.!.!.good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's good to unburden yourself of feelings like those, but it's not exactly a poem!. Kudos to you for expressing yourself though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hate love drippy poems and broken hearted ballads, but this one is hilarious!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Did you write it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's very good, you shoud make a song out and make it short!. It seem to me you love somebody and she hurt you but she wants to be friend or put you a hold on!. She said that she loves you and make you believe so and you want to know the true!. She use you when she wants but at the same time she wants to be free!. Please let me knowWww@QuestionHome@Com

How I interpret this poem is that the writer is lost!. Truly confused about his relationship!. Either his love is gone or he believes she is about to leave him!. He desperately wants her to cling to him but he is so worried about the right way to honestly express his feelings that he continually waffles in his statements!. This author sounds weak and depressed!.

Apart from this poem, if your girl is giving you mixed signals she is either already seeing someone else or is about to start looking!. You need to be the man you were when she met you!. Don't try to placate her fancies, just be that man she fell in love with!. Www@QuestionHome@Com