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Question: Is this poem good!? harsh critique is good!?
ive already posted this but only got one response so im posting again!.!.!.
this poem is written about the picture "The Scream" by Edvard Munch
The Sea is angry, it boils and foams
threatening to conquer the shores!.
Am i the only one who sees this!?
I try to tell them what the sea is planning!.
Doesn’t anyone hear me!?
The Sky is furious, its fire rains down!.
The Sun is now an enemy,
The Moon has fled in fear!.
Am I the only one who sees this!?
or just the only one who cares!.
People look at me like I’m crazy
they are oblivious to their surroundings!.
The Sea is filled with oil
and the Sky is filled with smoke
Doesn’t anyone hear them!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not sure why you capitalized all the forces and themes in nature (Sky, Moon, Sun, etc!.), but I like the fact that you did and I liked this poem!.
At first I just read the poem and not the prologue and thought it was about the end of the world or something!. This was good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love this poem! i dont know why, but i especially loved "the sun is now an enemy, the moon has fled in fear" !
write more poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com
From a scale of one to ten i'd say a 5 or 6!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its good but lacks the spark of the ages keep it up thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com